In the revision process of my paper, I have a few goals. One is that I would like to try to integrate more quotes from the two authors as that is a skill I could work on. Another goal I have is to develop a conclusion paragraph that will better wrap up my paper. Thirdly, I want to spend some more time working the spatial mode into my paper.
To achieve these goals, I am going to address each one individually in context of the paper as a whole. To have a strong conclusion paragraph, I think I need to go back to the introduction and make sure it relates back to my thesis while wrapping up my paper. Revisiting my thesis will also help me incorporate a quote from Galen Strawson that is relevant. I think I will work on spatial mode after writing the whole essay because then I can better see how I would like to organize it in that sense.
I think my biggest challenge will be finding a strong quote from Strawson to incorporate because I found myself disagreeing quite a lot with that essay. However, I think I will be able to find one that fits so I am not too worried about that.
If I come across a challenge that I cannot solve on my own, I will reach out to either my peers or Professor Emerson for help.
